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LIFE

Life isn't about keeping score.
It's not about how many friends you have or how accepted you are.
Not about if you have plans this weekend or if you're alone.
It isn't about who you're dating, who you used to date, how many people you've dated, or if you haven't been with anyone at all.
It isn't about who you have kissed.
It's not about sex.
It isn't about who your family is or how much money they have.
Or what kind of car you drive.
Or where you are sent to school.
It's not about how beautiful or ugly you are.
Or what clothes you wear, what shoes you have on, or what kind of music you
listen to.
It's not about if your hair is blonde, red, black or brown.
Or if your skin is too light or too dark.
It's not about what grades you get, how smart you are, how smart everybody else
thinks you are, or how smart standardised tests say you are.
It's not about what clubs you're in or how good you are at "your" sport.
It's not about representing your whole being on a piece of paper and seeing who
will "accept the written you".


LIFE JUST ISN'T

But, life is about who you love and who you hurt.
It's about who you make happy or unhappy purposefully.
It's about keeping or betraying trust.
It's about friendship, used as a sanctity or a weapon.
It's about what you say and mean, maybe hurtful, maybe heartening.
About starting rumors and contributing to petty gossip.
It's about what judgements you pass and why.  And who your judgements are
spread to.
It's about who you've ignored with full control and intention.
It's about jealousy, fear, ignorance, and revenge.
It's about carrying inner hate and love, letting it grow, and spreading it.
But most of all, it's about using your life to touch or poison other people's
hearts in such a way that could have never occurred alone.
Only you choose the way those hearts are affected, and those choices are what
life's all about.
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This is what I think is and isn't important in life
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:iconjilly-bean23:
Very insightful. I agree 100% with this. The way you organized these thoughts really emphasized the point you were trying to get across and the repetition also helped in that same emphasis. Great job. The words you used were definitely more than enough and I would have been disappointed had you over-used adjectives or tried to describe situations where any of these things take place. You just stayed stuck to your topic and kept it as truthful and blunt as possible. It flowed, it works, it hits home. Keep up the good work. Overall, I think this is a very good piece and I hope to see/read more from you!
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~EmpressofAndes Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So true! It's wonderful!
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~Trippy210 Jul 1, 2012  Student Photographer
Thankyou, I'm glad you like it :) Just try and pass it around if you would be so kind as I hope if people read this it might make them think and take abit more care with their words and actions.
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~EmpressofAndes Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok then, I'll try :D
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~Trippy210 Jul 8, 2012  Student Photographer
Thankyou :)
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~EmpressofAndes Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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"using your life to touch or poison other people's hearts"
I like this one. :nod:
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~Trippy210 Mar 6, 2012  Student Photographer
Thankyou :) I'm glad you liked it, I just think of it as some simple guidelines to help people live better, happier lives and be more aware of the consequences of their actions :)
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~Kurosaki224 Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally agree. I wish more people would think and live like that, caring about the choices they make in life and not the trivial things that mankind makes.
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Mood: Adoration ~Shikaxshake Jan 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow :3 I love this!
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~Trippy210 Jan 26, 2012  Student Photographer
Thanks :) I was just thinking how much simpler it would be if people just followed these and just thought about the consequences of their actions on other people. :sigh: Humanity frustrates me to no end sometimes.....
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